Post by Mellicha on Mar 29, 2007 21:42:05 GMT -5
These are some of my old RP posts I did on other Rp sites. I hope they can help you =P . . .
Ebony toned brute turns his visage in your direction gazing deep into you. His silver chasms held no pupils, but you could see the mischief dancing in them. You study him over further and notice that he looks no more then skin and bones. Silver piercings went down his spine. What strange spot to pierce, but nothing unusual. Above his left eye was yet another piercing, along with his left ear. Dipping his skull in greeting to you, a wicked smirk etched across his countenance. No words came from his vocals. Only a low, almost whispered laugh. His whipcord swayed lazily behind him. Perking a brow, he waits for you to speak up; he was growing quiet bored with just standing there watching you. Heaving a sigh, his expression changed and he turned his attention away to stare at a ebony female near by.
(This was a interduction to my character, but we'll just say this is a rp post. This would be a good post, except using the word 'you' instead of 'him/her' isn't a good idea)
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Killage had watched Bozi and Nasir leave the group of wolves, wondering if she too should follow behind them to confront the vixen that dared enter the forest clan’s terra. Deciding that it would be best if she went, she picked herself up slowly and shook off the water from the melting snow off of her snow hued pelt, before turning and sprinting after the two.
(Yet again, good post, but it's a bit short for my taste, but that's just me)
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The scent of two wolves caught the interest of the she-wolf curled up in the snow for warmth. Perking her auds, she lifted up her grey and cream toned skull to peer in their direction. They weren’t very far off, maybe a mile or two. Her lips peeled back in a sly smile revealing her crimson stain fangs from eating a rabbit a few moments ago, which now lay under a thin blanket of snow. She hadn’t had company in a while; perhaps they could supply some amusement, she thought while in the process of lifting her bodice off the earth. Shaking the snow from her pelt, she dashed off to meet the wolves, her snake like whipcord swaying every so carefully behind her.
Once she could visibly see them, she slowed to a trot, surveying them from a distance, gathering as much info on them as she could. The seemed to be kin, twins to be precise. She'd never talk to twins before, then again she never seen any either. This defiantly was an interesting day. The snow crushed underneath her foot fall; she had no reason to hide her presence from the two. I was just in the terra, when I noticed your scent on the winter breeze. Twins ... interesting. A smirk played across her muzzle, and her pools slitted lazily. She spoke softly and icily towards the two, though not in a threatening way. I'm dubbed Circe. Who might you be?
(This is one of my better posts.)
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Arvais gazed at the lone wolf with melancholy jewls. He lowered his whip chord inadvertently as the story of how he had lost his familly entered his audits. He could tell the brute had gone through alot and was in desperate need of a place to belong and call home. He also could tell that he was unsure of what to do, scared and confused; And rightfully so, he thought, after losing everyone he held dear in his heart. His harks burned from the words he heard about the humans, his talons began to grip the earth, and gradually he felt tears begin to well up in his orbs. Are all humans so cruel? They cant all be cruel can they? His emotions were a mixture of sadness, anger, and sympathy, though sympathy showed through the most. You seem like an honest sort, and I think anyone who has went through so much deserves a chance to rest. I will allow you to join our pack. I will take you to meet the other members of the pack, and then you can rest if you like. But first things first. Are you hungry? I can get you something to eat before we go. Oh, and by the way, my name's Arvais, alpha male of Kaninju pack.
(This is BC's post. So, far this one of the best examples)
Ebony toned brute turns his visage in your direction gazing deep into you. His silver chasms held no pupils, but you could see the mischief dancing in them. You study him over further and notice that he looks no more then skin and bones. Silver piercings went down his spine. What strange spot to pierce, but nothing unusual. Above his left eye was yet another piercing, along with his left ear. Dipping his skull in greeting to you, a wicked smirk etched across his countenance. No words came from his vocals. Only a low, almost whispered laugh. His whipcord swayed lazily behind him. Perking a brow, he waits for you to speak up; he was growing quiet bored with just standing there watching you. Heaving a sigh, his expression changed and he turned his attention away to stare at a ebony female near by.
(This was a interduction to my character, but we'll just say this is a rp post. This would be a good post, except using the word 'you' instead of 'him/her' isn't a good idea)
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Killage had watched Bozi and Nasir leave the group of wolves, wondering if she too should follow behind them to confront the vixen that dared enter the forest clan’s terra. Deciding that it would be best if she went, she picked herself up slowly and shook off the water from the melting snow off of her snow hued pelt, before turning and sprinting after the two.
(Yet again, good post, but it's a bit short for my taste, but that's just me)
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The scent of two wolves caught the interest of the she-wolf curled up in the snow for warmth. Perking her auds, she lifted up her grey and cream toned skull to peer in their direction. They weren’t very far off, maybe a mile or two. Her lips peeled back in a sly smile revealing her crimson stain fangs from eating a rabbit a few moments ago, which now lay under a thin blanket of snow. She hadn’t had company in a while; perhaps they could supply some amusement, she thought while in the process of lifting her bodice off the earth. Shaking the snow from her pelt, she dashed off to meet the wolves, her snake like whipcord swaying every so carefully behind her.
Once she could visibly see them, she slowed to a trot, surveying them from a distance, gathering as much info on them as she could. The seemed to be kin, twins to be precise. She'd never talk to twins before, then again she never seen any either. This defiantly was an interesting day. The snow crushed underneath her foot fall; she had no reason to hide her presence from the two. I was just in the terra, when I noticed your scent on the winter breeze. Twins ... interesting. A smirk played across her muzzle, and her pools slitted lazily. She spoke softly and icily towards the two, though not in a threatening way. I'm dubbed Circe. Who might you be?
(This is one of my better posts.)
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Arvais gazed at the lone wolf with melancholy jewls. He lowered his whip chord inadvertently as the story of how he had lost his familly entered his audits. He could tell the brute had gone through alot and was in desperate need of a place to belong and call home. He also could tell that he was unsure of what to do, scared and confused; And rightfully so, he thought, after losing everyone he held dear in his heart. His harks burned from the words he heard about the humans, his talons began to grip the earth, and gradually he felt tears begin to well up in his orbs. Are all humans so cruel? They cant all be cruel can they? His emotions were a mixture of sadness, anger, and sympathy, though sympathy showed through the most. You seem like an honest sort, and I think anyone who has went through so much deserves a chance to rest. I will allow you to join our pack. I will take you to meet the other members of the pack, and then you can rest if you like. But first things first. Are you hungry? I can get you something to eat before we go. Oh, and by the way, my name's Arvais, alpha male of Kaninju pack.
(This is BC's post. So, far this one of the best examples)